Posted by: Craziest | December 24, 2009

Zion

Zion is my first “Love”.  A story I started in the beginning of  of 8th grade, my writing in this is  heart stopping.  I can’t explain him, you’ll just have to read the story. But I will say that he’s perfect. : ) Even after all this time they still remain my favorites. Myri (who i really didn’t portray right) Greg (who technically isn’t my character) and Beth who was based on me.

“I couldn’t help, but notice that his face looked a lot more calm and loving than mine did. His eyes were serene and his mouth locked in a defiant smile. His fingers entwined with mine were the only way I felt the tension we were in. He was a confidant pillar of strength and yet he wasn’t prideful. Amazing how a person could both be a leader and a follower, a rebel and yet so devoted to helping others.”

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  1. It’s so sad. It really isn’t fun to be in love with a character, a figment of your imagination. No one can ever compare and you spend every minute hoping you’ll meet someone at least close. All we can do is hope we get someone great that will be what we want when we reach perfection is the Celestial Kingdom.


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